My Witness Is The Empty Sky

Feb 2009
8:19 AM EDT

Hello World.

Hi Everyone.
I'd like to introduce myself first and foremost.
My name is Bailey Strange and I'm an aspiring novelist.
I have some chapters to a story I've been writing and see, I'm kind of in a bind...I'm hesistant about sending my stories to a publishing agency for fear of rejection. So, I've decided that I'll send my story to those who are interested to gain some feedback and people's reaction, hoping it will help me take criticism a little bit better. I'd really appreciate if you'd take a look at the chapters and get back to me with whatever you feel should be said. I'm open for comments, advice, suggestions, and brutally honest (and harsh if necessary) critiques. If there is something you need done that pertains to this, I'd be happy to return the favor. Thank You! - Bailey Strange.

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About Me: "Start The Revolution." Bailey Nichole Strange. "I'll Sleep When I'm Dead." Eighteen... & Life Keeps Flying, Dallas, Texas. Downtown Is Where It's At. Single & Lovin' It! Basically, I Keep It Basic. In College. I Don't Worry About Things. I'm Wild & Wreckless. I'd Rather Do Something Spontaneously. I Don't Date Because It Limits My Freedom. Adventure Is Key. I Live Fast; Can Your Keep Up? I Write Novels. It's Motivation To Survive. Oh, & Today Is A Day Of Opportunities. Hi Everyone. I'd like to introduce myself first and foremost. My name is Bailey Strange and I'm an aspiring novelist. I have some chapters to a story I've been writing posted on another site. See, I'm kind of in a bind...I'm hesistant about sending my stories to a publishing agency for fear of rejection. So, I've decided to post some chapters online to gain some feedback and people's reaction, hoping it will help me take criticism a little bit better. I'd really appreciate if you'd take a look at the chapters and get back to me with whatever you feel should be said. I'm open for comments, advice, suggestions, and brutally honest (and harsh if necessary) critiques. If there is something you need done that pertains to this, I'd be happy to return the favor. Thank You! - Bailey Strange.

Interests: painting. crafting & creating any & everything. anything artistic. going to shows, listening to music, etc. of course, writing...my stories, lyrics, poems and such. walking downtown. warm rainy days. singing... watching movies w/ my mom and my kitty, sam! chillin' with my godmother...who is too bad ass. reading substantial books. doing research for the genre i write my stories in. (i'm speaking in tongues.) oh, anddddd i loooooove to dance!

Favorite Music: the academy is... bring me the horizon. heavyheavylowlow. the acacia strain. maylene & the son's of disaster. white chapel. motley crue. from first to last. incubus. born of osirius. big tuck. lil wyte. panic! at the disco. megadeth. the allman brothers. joe walsh. lynard skynard. janis joplin. jimi hendrix. coldplay. foo fighters. the strokes. horse the band. metrostation. nirvana. playradioplay! stick to your guns. seether. sublime. boston. benny benassi. and many, many more!